Monday, July 3, 2017

cinderella

This is a little story about Cinderella the whole room 3 class did one
Cinderella
I believe that Cinderella should of gone to the royal palace because if she stayed with her stepmother and her stepsisters she would been treated very badly.

I believe that cinderella shouldn’t gone to the royal palace because when it is the next day the prince charming came.
The stepmother called out cinderella, cinderella cinderella come out here at once so she come. So the prince charming got the slipper and put it on cinderella’s foot.

Therefore, I believe that cinderella was right.


This is part of my persuasive writing. I worked hard on making paragraphs.My next learning step is to make sure I am writing more interesting things.

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